引き続き正誤表です。２章は少ないのでどうでも良いような大文字と小文字の使い分けなどもあげてみました。これはもちろん個人の趣味の問題で、これでなければ間違っているわけではありません。
今速記ノートのe-text化・校訂作業が進んでいるようですが、その注でUrtext とNotes でのcapitalization や単語の選択（But とYet など)の違いに言及している箇所が、実は両者に違いが無く、違いがあるように見えたのは校訂が完了したはずのUrtext の中にHLC の表現が紛れ込んでいたためであるのを見かけました。もとが間違っていると建設的な考察のつもりが空振りしてしまいます。
T 2 B 43. ...Many Souls offered their efforts on behalf of the Separated Ones but they could not withstand ...
T 2 B 43. ...Many Souls offered their efforts on behalf of the Separated ones but they could not withstand ...
（M: Ones but / N: ones. But とりあえず capitalization のみN に従う。気になったのは同じパラグラフに Separated one という表記があるため）
T 2 B 45. ...Learning, itself, like the classrooms in which it occurs, is temporary.
T 2 B 45. ...Learning itself, like the classrooms in which it occurs, is temporary.
（M・N 両者とも Learning itself, ... 転写ミス）
T 2 B 49. (Note to HS: The reason this is upsetting to you is because the Atonement is a TOTAL commitment.
T 2 B 49. (Note to HS: The reason this is upsetting you is because the Atonement is a TOTAL commitment.
（M、N 共にtoなし、表現としてはどちらも可能だが、M・N に合わせることにする。）
T 2 B 51. (The above notes were taken with great difficulty by HS, and constitute the only series this far that were ...
T 2 B 51. (The above notes were taken with great difficulty by HS, and constitute the only series thus far that were ...
（N は存在しない。リタイピング時のコメントの部分。M では thus。転写ミス）
T 2 B 61. In the re-interpretation of defenses, they are...
T 2 B 61. In the reinterpretation of defenses, they are...
（M の表記は reinterpretation）
T 2 C 15. We said in a previous section that the miracle is an expression of miracle-Mindedness. Miracle-Mindedness ...
T 2 C 15. We said in a previous section that the miracle is an expression of Miracle-Mindedness. Miracle-Mindedness ...
（M: miracle-Mindedness N はこの部分欠如。直後の表記に合わせる）
T 2 C 16. ...and has literally upset it. (i.e. turned it upside down).
T 2 C 16. ...and has literally upset it (i.e., turned it upside down).
（M の通り、ピリオドを削除、コンマを追加）
T 2 E 34. ...but by re-interpreting it instead of redistributing it.
T 2 E 34. ...but by reinterpreting it instead of redistributing it.
（M の表記に合わせる）
T 2 E 55. ...But there are some additional awarenesses which might be helpful.
T 2 E 55. ...But there are some additional awareness which might be helpful.
（M: some additional awarenesses / some＋【C】名詞複数形；～＋【U】名詞 awareness n [U] 、非可算なので複数語尾をとる。）
T 2 F 1. ...because they MUST emerge from basic conflict it they are to bring peace to the minds of others.
T 2 F 1. ...because they MUST emerge from basic conflict if they are to bring peace to the minds of others.
（ ２００１年のReady_to_Print_Book.pdf 以来のミスタイプ。M は if ）
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