2009年10月27日火曜日

Urtext errata - Text Chapter 1・2 追加

T 1 B 22e.       Corrections Re Pt. 21 cobwebs of iron. This is upside down as stated.
T 1 B 22e.       Corrections Re Pt. 21 about “cobwebs of iron. This is upside down as stated.
(This の前の引用符に対応する右ダブル引用符が後ろを探しても無い。N を見ると引用符で囲まれているのは cobwebs of iron であったので、N に近づける形で修正する。N: Correct the point about “cobwebs of iron.” That one is upside down as stated.)

T 2 B 12.         2.  In this context, your remark that after the burning, I swore if I ever saw him again, ...... recognize him.
T 2 B 12.         2.  In this context, your remark that after the burning, I swore if I ever saw him again, ...... recognize him.
(after の前の引用符に対応する右ダブル引用符がない。N にしたがって him. の後に補う。)

T 2 B 51.         ...she was told, don't worry about the notes. They are right, but YOU are not sufficiently Right-Minded yet to write about the Atonement with comfort. You will write about it yet with joy. )
T 2 B 51.         ...she was told, don't worry about the notes. They are right, but YOU are not sufficiently Right-Minded yet to write about the Atonement with comfort. You will write about it yet with joy.)
(対応する ” 挿入)

T 2 B 56.         This morning we reviewed the whole episode. He said he was VERY pleased at the COMPARATIVE lack of fear ...
T 2 B 56.         This morning we reviewed the whole episode. He said he was VERY pleased at the COMPARATIVE lack of fear ...
(対応する ” がないので削除。Mの原稿の汚れに見える。 N にもない)

T 2 B 58.         ...'Hold fast', and please do so.”
T 2 B 58.         ...'Hold fast', and please do so.” )
(T 2 B 55. の最初の括弧に対応する?閉じ括弧。M にあり。)

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